Thursday, August 18, 2011

the going-to-press blues and other rambles

Another day, another two books to press. Just whipping them out really, full of grace. No three in the morning panics about French culinary terms or whether my authors can withstand the cracking pace set for them. Or whether I can.

In one of the books that I sent off today was this line: 'I could feel a little of the orchard conversation clinging to me.' It clung to me for ages; what a beautiful way of showing something linger.

One of the things I love most about editing is logic and continuity. Fucked if I know why; my desk is messy and I think I overpay Telstra. But I love discovering in chapter three that it's Thursday not Tuesday, and stitching back together a whole sequence of events that would otherwise have unravelled. I love making sure that the heroine's long, tangly strawberry-blond hair stays that way through the entire book, unless she gets a surprise platinum bob, in which case I like keeping it surprised and platinum. I love the threads of a book, and I'm fascinated by writers (like the orchard conversation guy) who can keep all their threads so clearly in their mind that they know, unerringly, that changing three words of dialogue in chapter 10 will have consequences on the second page of chapter 15, and the third last line of the book.

I meant to say something about the going-to-press blues. But that is a whole other blog.

I just watched the first episode of season four of Friday Night Lights, which basically means I just watched Tim Riggins.

Saturday, June 4, 2011

getting loose

I don't keep a journal. I have in the past...a long, long time ago. But today I went to Creative Journaling, a workshop run by author Simmone Howell and poet Lisa D'Onofrio in Daylesford. The workshop was designed to shake your writing up; what I hadn't banked on was that it would shake my mind up too. Six hours passed in about ten minutes.

One of the exercises was about possibilities that can be kickstarted by ephemera. We dipped for old postcards, scraps of writing, cut-out pictures of retro-glamour women. I chose: 'Perhaps they could find new happiness in the New World.' Brilliant in my post-Patrick Ness phase. This is what I wrote:

Her hands were thinner now
Three weeks until entry
Silver packages of food
I can't, she said
I can't eat.
This again.
Galaxies have grown in her eyes
And settled like scales on the ship walls
A fish flying through space
A woman shrinking with hope

It was so nice to write something that wasn't my novel. I never do that. Every spare writing second is spent in an exploding city. I loved being in a spaceship instead.

They're running another one in September—so worth going to.

Friday, May 27, 2011

readings matters washes and dries my mind

I spent the day at the Reading Matters conference today. It was a weird day—I've been out of action for a couple of weeks and being elbow to elbow with other people all day was like being shoved into a washing machine. But, as always, I came away thinking hard and admiring harder.

1. YA. YA, YA, YA. How I love thee and loathe thee. (The construction of 'YA', not the books.)  I've just finished reading Patrick Ness's The Knife of Never Letting Go. Spent all day banging on about it. I haven't been this scared or exhilarated, lost in a book since...I'm not sure actually, maybe never. This book is a big freaky sci-fi poem. The writing is exquisite—the voice is exquisite. Todd Hewitt is scared and his voice was so close around me I was terrified alongside him. The pace is breakneck. I basically ate the book. So today at Reading Matters, listening to all the amazingness going on onstage, I was depressed by the thought that if Patrick Ness was up there his audience would be limited to 300 enlightened readers who know that the writing going on in the 'YA' field kicks it. He, and many other 'YA' writers, should be speaking to stadiums of thousands. I know I'm being overly simplistic.

Frank Cottrell Boyce reviewed the book for the Guardian. (Read the full review here; I've pulled out a couple of paras that go to the heart of what I'm talking about.)

If I have one quibble, it is that I think it should be sitting proudly on the shelf next to these ['adult'] books, rather than being hidden away in the "young adult" ghetto. There's been a lot of fury among authors recently about the proposal to "age-band" children's books, but in a way they're too late. The real disaster has already happened. It's called "young adult" fiction. It used to be the case that you moved on from children's fiction to adult fiction, from The Owl Service, maybe, to Catcher in the Rye. There were, of course, some adult authors who were more fashionable with teenage readers than others - Salinger, Vonnegut, Maya Angelou. But these were chosen by teenagers themselves from the vast world of books. Some time ago, someone saw that trend and turned it into a demographic. Fortunes were made but something crucial was lost. We have already ghettoised teenagers' tastes in music, in clothes and - God forgive us - in food. Can't we at least let them share our reading? Is there anything more depressing than the sight of a "young adult" bookshelf in the corner of the shop. It's the literary equivalent of the "kids' menu" - something that says "please don't bother the grown-ups". If To Kill a Mockingbird were published today, that's where it would be placed, among the chicken nuggets.
This is not just a question of taste. It seems to me that the real purpose of stories and reading is to take you out of yourself and put you somewhere else. Anything that is made to be sold to a particular demographic, however, will always end up reflecting the superficial concerns of that demographic. I've lived through an era in which demographic-fixation murdered popular cinema and replaced a vibrant art form with a kind of digital holding-pen for teenage boys. I think we're in danger of doing the same to fiction. The best young adult fiction - The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-time, A Swift Pure Cry, Noughts and Crosses and so on - strolls out of its category. I've no doubt at all that The Knife of Never Letting Go will do the same. Don't let the demographic exclude you.

2. Markus Zusak, reading from his new work, had this line describing character: 'They want the night to see them coming.' Beautiful.

3. Lili Wilkinson, who won the Ibby Ena Noel Award in 2010 for Scatterheart, received the award today. Congrats, Lili. I still think about Scatterheart often. Lili was also responsible for my favourite fashion of the day, worn by her mum, Carole Wilkinson—a necklace of felted circles that Lili sewed for her mum's birthday.

4. Cassandra Clare is hilarious. I can't wait to read her books, despite the spoiler, then the reverse spoiler! Are they or are they not brother and sister???

5. In a tangential way, looping back to the first point, I spent a lot of today wondering why I like reading about 16-year-olds. Is it because (as put out there by Kirsty Eager on the 'monsters' panel) from that point on our bodies are slowly dying? Is this a death thing?

Wednesday, May 18, 2011

good worlds

Hurrah! Leon Davidson just won the New Zealand Post Awards: http://www.booksellers.co.nz/awards/new-zealand-post-childrens-book-awards/2011-winners

What moved me to tears, many times over, when editing Zero Hour were the words of the soldiers themselves:
'When you next see this I'll be dead: don't worry...Try to think I did the only possible thing, as I tell you I would do again if I had the chance.' Sergeant David Baker
And in Messines, in 1917, 'New Zealander Private Sidney 'Stan' Stanfield saw his mate Private Janes Hallett...get shot as they moved out of a trench. He recalled when he returned the following day to bury him,
poor old Jim was laying there, cuddled up in a heap, as men die. Don't forget we were all young, we didn't die easy. You don't die at once, you're not shot and killed stone dead. We were fit and highly trained, and of course we didn't die easy. You were slow to die, and you'd find them huddled up in a heap like kids gone to sleep, you know; cuddled up dead.'


And Cath Crowley won the Ethel Turner in the NSW Prem's Literary Awards. http://www.pla.nsw.gov.au/awards-shortlists/ethel-turner-prize-for-young-peoples-literature
With the two most beautiful opening lines. 
'Let me make it in time. Let me meet Shadow.' 

Saturday, May 7, 2011

writing tip #3

Carpet.
My second last house (a flat) had beautiful messmate floors and a big window that trucked in beautiful light. The view was over the apartment block opposite, the mirror of ours. Looking out was a little Rear Window, in a downtown pre-renovated Northcote way (ie, full colour, 1960s square block, nothing pretty—and no one opened their curtains but us, so actually there was only a whole lot of imagining.) The floors and the window were lovely, but there was nowhere to get comfortable. It was a bad place for writing.
My last house has been renovated all in white paint and floorboards. It looked pretty, but was cold, echoey, with not a skerrick of carpet in sight. Too cold for creativity.
This new house has carpet. Lots of it. Carpet is warm and comfortable. Forget the baltic pine underneath. It's a great place for writing.

Thursday, May 5, 2011

writing tip #2

V/Line trains, window seat, lap top. Desolate landscape, thin sunset.

Tuesday, April 12, 2011

CBCA 2011


Congratulations Cath Crowley
Congratulations Leon Davidson
Congratulations Leanne Hall
Congratulations Sally Rippin
Congratulations Fiona Wood


Cheers to all the notable and shortlisted authors. Champagne all round, and umbrellas, and boots that don't let the rain in.

I'm breathing again—just. When the notables list came up an hour earlier than the shortlist and I didn't know that they were pulling the shortlist from the notables I was a basketcase, full of breathless, butterfly-like cliches—adverbs even. Then I was walking on sunshine.

http://cbca.org.au/awards.htm

Monday, April 11, 2011

three hours

Three hours and counting until the CBC announces the shortlist. Good luck to all my authors and friends.

Wednesday, April 6, 2011

pronunciation

Julia Gillard just pronounced 'hyperbole' (hi-perbily) as 'hyper-bowl'. I am not sneering. I once thought that's how it was pronounced. Then I heard someone say it. And then 'apologia'. Really? That's how you pronounce it?

watching trainwrecks

How not to do it (meanwhile being effortlessly entertaining).

http://booksandpals.blogspot.com/2011/03/greek-seaman-jacqueline-howett.html



Sunday, March 27, 2011

time, or lack of it

Harriet has just given up her day sleep. That's when I wrote. So I will give up TV. And reading. And quite possibly cooking as well. And I will write at night. But I won't give up reading until I've finished the Ethel Turner shortlist. I just finished Big River, Little Fish. Beautiful writing and a slippery, satisfying twist. There are so many books that promise a pay-off that doesn't come. Far rarer are books that seem to be headed for a sweet, quiet ending, then give you bucketloads of unexpected magic, and pull it off.

Wednesday, March 16, 2011

the Ethel Turner

Congrats to the six author shortlisted for the Ethel Turner Prize in the NSW Premier's Literary Awards.

Cath Crowley for Graffiti Moon
Melina Marchetta for The Piper's Son
Kirsty Eagar for Saltwater Vampires
Belinda Jeffrey for Big River, Little Fish
Jaclyn Moriarty for Dreaming of Amelia
Michelle Cooper for The FitzOsbornes in Exile

Is the Ethel Turner a prize only for Ethels, or Kirstys or Caths? Nope. But in a hell-strong field of YA published last year, the brightest, shiniest books just happened to be written by women. Or so the Ethel Turner judges thought.

I have some reading to do.

Monday, March 14, 2011

counting down...

In less than a month the Children's Book Council will be naming their shortlist for the book of the year awards. From a publisher's point of view, this is the time of year where we hold our breath and hope. The CBC awards are the only children's books awards in Australia that cause books to be sold. I cannot wait for this to change, for the Inkys and the premiers' awards to gain traction. In a market that is small and extremely talented, many writers who deserve to be on the CBC list don't make it, and every year this is pretty much heartbreaking. 
Meanwhile, there are two things I'd love to see in the CBC awards: a category for debut authors—so books like Notes from the Teenage Underground don't get pushed aside—and for the non-fiction to be divided into age ranges, as the fiction is, so picture books aren't competing with upper-YA.
Good luck to everyone on April 12. I will be forgetting to breathe.

Saturday, February 26, 2011

for the description of the punctured sky...

The last book that left me feeling heart-punched was Margo Lanagan's Tender Morsels.

Non-perpetual twilight

You’re standing in a bookshop. In front of you, face out, is a cover with a black background. In the foreground, an apple is cupped in pale hands—offered to you. Don’t take a bite. If you do, you might enter perpetual twilight and miss the truth on the shelf: that some of the best writing around is happening in YA fiction more broadly—much of it from Australian authors; that there are infinite trends, possibilities and other reasons to turn to YA.

Mockingjays are burning up, as Suzanne Collins’ violent dystopia, The Hunger Games trilogy, ends with a bang, or a whimper depending on whether you wanted Katniss to choose Gale or Peeta or herself. The Gallagher Girls spooks-in-training tread a fine, satisfying line between CIA code-cracking and romance. ‘Pink’ books are hot. Black covers are hot. Pretty books are hot, especially if wolves are featured within (Maggie Stiefvater’s Shiver and Linger). And angels, and fantasy, as always. So are books set over one night, books with two authors, books told from multiple points of view. Many trends; many possibilities.

YA isn’t segmented in the way that adult books are—fantasy sits alongside crime, pink sits alongside grit—enabling readers to fall into unexpected places. But the thing that is truly smouldering about YA isn’t the lack of category restrictions on the shelf, but the blowing open of genres within the books themselves.

Back to vampires: There was Buffy, then Angel, then Twilight, which added shape-shifter Jacob Black, who assumes the form of a wolf, into the mix. Then 2009's Liar, a psychological thriller by Justine Larbalestier that was already messing with everyone’s heads, further played with the reader by derailing partway through into a werewolf book—seemingly—easily the most innovatively structured werewolf thriller out now, and an extraordinary achievement in terms of story, in anyone’s books. YA like this is the reason that expectations about audience, as well as everything else, is collapsing, why readers are realizing that YA is no longer—not that it ever was—just for teenagers.

Last year, Leanne Hall’s This Is Shyness—winner of the Text Prize for Young Adult and Children’s Writing—took what are familiar tropes in YA—a girl, a guy, a chance meeting, a one-night fledgling-romance, in other words a pink book, but then blew the genre away.
In the suburb of Shyness, the sun doesn’t rise and the border has a strange energy. A boy who howls, literally (and suffers from psychosomatic hypertrichosis—look it up)—Wolfboy—meets a stranger at the Diabetic Hotel. She tells him her name is Wildgirl, and she dares him to be her guide through the endless night. But Shyness’s perpetual darkness is filled with gangs of wild Kidds jacked up on sugar. And the book, which we have long known is not exactly pink, morphs into a quest narrative in a familiar-unfamiliar world. But, despite where the story is set, the heart of the book takes place between Wildgirl and Wolfboy. Wildgirl describes the feeling of standing at the top of a building looking out over the city: ‘a sunburst might explode from my chest’. Similarly, getting lost in their conversations leaves you, cocoons you, in a state somewhere between falling in love and freewheeling downhill in the dark on a warm night.

Simultaneously, another writer set her book over one night. The first two lines (as well as the rest) of Cath Crowley’s Graffiti Moon haunt me: ‘Let me make it in time. Let me meet Shadow.’ The night unfolds: a night of seeing painted guys with grass growing from their hearts as, from one paint-strewn wall to the next, Lucy chases the idea of graffer Shadow who turns out to be Ed who might still be in love with his ex. A lyrical urban adventure romance told from the points of view of Ed and Lucy, spliced with their friend Leo’s poetry—sometimes the gritty urban variety; at other times not:
I'd drift through space/
And fall through dreams/
Into dark skies
For the characters these nights are long, with many shifts in mood. For the reader, the nights are much too short as we race downhill in the dark.

So, where to from here with the trend guessing? The truth is, no one knows. And no one should care about the lack of knowing, because a werewolf urban romance told from two points of view, interwoven with poetry, set in a world where the sun doesn’t rise, could easily be next, and alongside so much current Australian YA writing it will be so fresh and stand-alone that you’ve forgotten what’s come before it. In fact, it’s probably already been written.

 

Thursday, February 10, 2011

Thursday, February 3, 2011

crazy stars tonight

I've just read this book on submission. It was beautiful. We're going to try to acquire it (fingers crossed) so I won't tell you what it's called, but it had this most beautiful line: 'Crazy stars tonight.' When I was thinking of a name for this blog, a few things popped into mind, and then that did.